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Showing posts with label Flash Fiction. Show all posts

Saturday, October 19, 2013

Heading West

According to Safe Horizon.org, one in four women will experience domestic violence during her lifetime. Learn more here.

This is my flash fiction piece about it:


Heading West


He said she was nothing when he found her and would be nothing without him.

When she started sleepwalking he called her bat shit crazy. Sometimes she did normal things in her sleep, like watching late night television; Sometimes stranger things, like weeding the flowerbeds-- in the kitchen floor.

When the flowerbeds were clean and late night shows were reruns, she did other things like organizing drawers and packing for vacations that were only dreams. Sometimes she frantically scribbled to-do lists in the dark. When he found them he thought the preschooler wrote them and told him he hoped to God he turned out smarter than his mother.

He said he’d take the children she didn’t deserve and disappear if she didn’t see a shrink. She kept every appointment, twice weekly for months, but the sleepwalking continued. 

If her subconscious activities woke him, he would sometimes strike her, but things that happened in sleep were not as painful as words spoken in daylight, in front of the children.

After six months of therapy she came home from a session and found him drunk and still drinking with a buddy, laughing too loud about what a stupid stupid bitch he’d married.

Later, when he was good and passed out, she sleepwalked for the last time. 

She went to the dresser in the guest room and removed all the cash that he’d hidden there, slipped it into her bag next to the lists of contacts her doctor recommended, and loaded packed luggage into the car. 

She weeded flowerbeds in the kitchen once more, removing the things she’d hidden under a loose board: more cash, important papers, passports he never knew existed.

Then she carried the sleeping children to the car, buckled them in, and headed west.






Sunday, June 30, 2013


This is my flash fiction story I entered in the Lascaux Flash contest. There were lots of great entries and  you can read them here: http://www.lascauxflash.com/


Salvation


Granny dragged me down to the Baptist revival tent early so we could get seats up close. I don't know why, 'cause the preacher screamed so loud that people clear over at the MFA could hear. He flapped his arms too, like a swarm of bees was after him.

When he quoted Mark he hollered that if you believed, holdin’ snakes couldn’t even hurt you, and I started sniffling ‘cause I was scared of snakes.

When he got to Luke 10:19 "Behold, I give unto you power to tread on serpents and scorpions, and over all the power of the enemy: and nothing shall by any means hurt you," I busted out bawlin' about as loud as the preacher was preachin' 'cause he was still carryin’ on about snakes and just last week I had stepped barefoot on a scorpion.

What I was feelin' then was powerful alright but not nothin' like the power that preacher meant, so I thought surely God thinks I ain’t believin' enough and half of Hickory County knows it now too and I'm gonna go to hell.

The preacher's wife came runnin' over to see if I needed help or I’d found Jesus or what and Granny yanked me up by my arm and said, "She just misses her mammy, that's all."

We hightailed it back to Granny’s, where Pap had the dominoes out ready to play with me, like he somehow knew we wouldn't be down there revivin' very long.